Tutorial to non-Sue DBZ fan-OCHow to make your DBZ fan-character NOT a SueDisclaimer: These are guidelines. Breaking one or two does no make your character a Mary-Sue. However, if youre breaking all of them, you might want to consider a re-write. If you dont know what a Mary-Sue is? Wiki-it or google-it.I have no rights to DBZ, thats all owned by other people.Do not repost this material elsewhere without asking permission first.But I MUST be with character-X or else!Common sue-ism and self-insert indulgence is to make a character be in a relationship with a canon character. In DBZ Trunks and Vegeta are probably the two more oftenly used for people pairing their characters with. If you go into how your character is much better for pairing with the character than the canon pairing, ytheyre more likely a Sue. If your character and the canon character are power spawning, (400 babies!
Tsuki Yasha, Samurai-GirlName: Tsuki YashaTrue Name: Tsukimihana YashahanamiAlias: Kiyosharu (mashing of Kiyoshi, meaning pure and Masaru, meaning victory)Race: half demon, half humanAge: 18Height: 5 7Weight: 165 poundsAppearance: Tsuki stands a bit tall with only gentle curves to her body. She is fit and tone from constant work, training, travel, and combat. A long scar marks her body starting from the front of her left hip and up along her back to end at the back of her right shoulder. Her face is one the thinner side with a stern appearance, high cheekbones, and a thin nose and lips. Sharp and thin eyebrows are above her soft brown eyes. Her hair is primarily black and tied back. There are several lines of blue through her hair, and her bangs are colored red. Her normal clothing is usually a simple kimono loose around the legs for good range of movement. She often dresses in a t